Blog 32

It is hard to say how my paper is going. I finish most parts to day, and everything makes sense for me. I do not know how about if other people read my paper. It looks like I write a lot, but there still have many details need to be changed. For this draft, I completely give up all my examples that I wrote in the last draft, because the tutor told me it is hard to find a connection between my examples. This time, I focus on one example, and tried to find some special examples below the topic (looks like this sentence does not make sense, you can try to guess what I want to say~~) I hope my example can directly tell readers what I want to say and help them understand my topic easily.  If it does not work, I need to restart all my work, and find a better example to sport my topic.

For English paper, I usually do not have enough time to change it again and again, because I know my English level. Revising by myself can cause more and more problem. I always like to talk my paper with English tutor, or American students. They always give me great suggestion on both grammar side and logical side. It is really hard to learn how to writing in English as a mother language L . I still have a lot of work to do~~~ I hope that I can be a really English writer after I finish this class.