“In thousands human eyes have thousands Hamlet.” I do not remember who said that, but I have a deep understanding about this sentence. This week I went to writing center for several times, and every time, I can find new ideas from different tutors. Some tutors watched Dollhouse, they can directly understand what I want to say in the essay, and gave me suggestions about my essay. On Tuesday, one tutor told me that my second resources are too wide to handle, so I decided to focus my second resources only on one side instead of several topics. However, most of time, I meet tutors that never watched Dollhouse before. Let those tutors reading my paper is a great challenge for me. I can clearly know whether my paper make sense or not. Today, I met a tutor, and I need to keep talking with him so that he can really know what I want to say in my paper. That means I need to add more background about Dollhouse. I need to make sure that every single word at right place and every word means what they should mean. I need to pay attention on my vocabularies because there can be huge differences between two similar words. It is hard for me to do all these work because when I proof read my own paper, I can easily understand what I want to say. However, when American people, or other people read my paper, they cannot complete understand what I want to say.
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